Review: The Champion

From what I could tell from reading the book, Carla Capshaw’s The Champion seems to be the third book in a series, with characters from previous books featuring heavily in this one.  It would have been nice if the netGalley blurb – or the author’s website – indicated such, so that I would have been warned of that beforehand.The Champion cover

Tiberia the Younger is in desperate need of help; with her hoydenish reputation and string of broken proposals, her father Tiberius has decided that no decent man will have her, and that the best way for Tibi to give some honour back to the family is to join the priesthood, despite her lack of religious leaning.  Having no desire to become a temple priestess Tibi runs away from home, seeking her cousin Pelonia, who should be newly arrived in Rome with her former-gladiator husband.

Unfortunately, Tibi arrives at the home of famed gladiator Alexius of Iolcos, Pelonia’s host, to find that her cousins are not expected to arrive for several more days.  While Alexius offers to protect Tibi from her father, at least until Pelonia arrives, the undeniable attraction between them almost seems more dangerous than Tiberius’ inevitable wrath…

Like many books that are part of a series, the author relies on you having read the earlier books; the relationships between Tibi and Alexius and the various other characters were passed over only briefly, and I didn’t get a real understanding of who everyone was until right near the end.

There were a few things, like the prospect of Tibi being sent to a temple, that felt insufficiently explained: both Tibi and Alexius reacted with horror at the revelation of which temple she would be sent to, but the reason for this horror was never revealed to the reader.  Ancient Rome is not really my area of historical preference, but I’m familiar with all of the major Roman deities and many of the minor ones, and the name didn’t have any significance at all.  It’s possible I’m missing a blatantly obvious reference, but if so, I don’t care enough to assign myself homework.

The official blurb didn’t fit too accurately with the actual content of the story.  The vast majority of the time is spent with Tibi and Alexius being very firmly Just Friends, with many long glances and wistful sighs but no hanky-panky or even stolen kisses.  Like so many heroines, Tibi is supposedly oblivious to her allegedly breathtaking beauty, and has no idea that a man might find her attractive.  Maybe this trope was cute the first hundred times.  And the one with the hero deciding he stands no chance with the girl because he’s “not good enough”, etc.

The end was rather anticlimactic, after the spectre of Tibi’s father’s wrath hanging over their heads, it reached a small crescendo and then… didn’t really go anywhere.  The last-minute drama right at the end seemed utterly ridiculous and unnecessary, and then any repercussions from that, social, familial or otherwise, were completely skipped over.  Tibi’s relationship with her sister was never really settled one way or another on-screen, and Tibi’s father received none of the comeuppance he richly deserved.

I liked the background of Ancient Rome, and the rather unique (in my experience, anyway) setting in and around a gladiator school.  I’m not sure how historically accurate all of the information was, let alone Tibi’s archery skills, but it was fairly convincing and I enjoyed seeing Tibi gain some self-confidence and grow through the story.

Unique setting aside, the underlying story was generic rake-meets-girl, misunderstandings-ensue romance with a strong Christian flavour, particularly towards the end of the book.  Again, something I wasn’t really expecting when reading a romance set in Ancient Rome.  But I suppose it’s different strokes for different folks, and Christianity is not really one of mine.  Perhaps if it had been less blatantly evangelical ‘oh look God does miracles’ at the end here.

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    • Pam
    • September 30th, 2011

    Wow, I couldn’t disagree with you more. I read this book recently and enjoyed it so much I went and read the first two books in the series. I thought Capshaw did such a great job with the setting, I found myself feeling like I was there and I found it really refreshing that the characters didn’t just jump into bed with other. I didn’t have a problem understanding that the heroine’s cousins were friends of the hero and that was why the heroine went to the gladiator school. I guess the fact that her father wanted to be rid of her badly enough to force her into temple service against her will was enough of a reason for me to root for her. As for the ending, it kept me up late because I couldn’t put the book down.

    I enjoyed seeing these two fall in love and I thought they were great together. I didn’t have problem with Alexius feeling unworthy of her because the author made it clear that everyone felt the same because he was a gladiator and a murderer. Any guy who didn’t have those feelings after what he’d been through would be considered a little too egotistical, imo. And as for the beauty question, I think it wasn’t that she was such a raving beauty (other people described her as pretty or lovely but not beautiful) so much as the hero happened to think she was. Compared to her sister who was the real beauty in the family, it’s no wonder the heroine didn’t think she was all that. And I got the impression, the heroine just wasn’t vain. She had other interests than what she looked like. And, I’m kinda glad because I can’t stand when a heroine thinks she’s God gift. Maybe because I can’t relate. lol

    I also didn’t find the Christian component overwhelming. Both the h&h had witnessed changes in their friends who’d become Christians and they’d come realize that faith spoke to them as well. I certainly didn’t feel preached at and even if you’re not a Christian, I don’t think it’s a stretch to realize people come to their own conclusions and make decisions in part thanks to the lives they see around them.

    Anyway, like you said, different strokes for different folks. The only reason I’m commenting was because I enjoyed this book and the previous two so much.

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